Sunday, September 19, 2010

Chapter 9 part 1

sorry it took so long between school,things after school,and Softball on the weekends now, i'm trying, but comment and tellme what you think.





I walked over a sat with my two grandmother.

"Hi, sweetheart" Nanny Crosby said

"Hi, you two having fun?"

"yes" Nanny Fordes said

"yes, watching her have fun." Nanny crosby said as Ali came running to me all wet.

"Daddy,come down on the dock."

"I'll be down"

"okay" she said running back down.

"you love her" Nanny Crosby

"well yeah"

"I mean she really is every thing to you."

"She is. i don't what I do without her. she is everything to me."

"Daddy!" Ali yelled

"wel I better get down there, thanks for coming"

"your welcome sweetie"

I walked down to the water, Ali was on the edge of the water.Max xame up to me.

"Man. she a handful, I don't how yodo it."

"trust me, it not easy, well she should sleep tonight."

"Ali where you going?" I said watching her start walking on the dock.

I rolled my eyes

"yeah, daddy on the dock." Max said

"haha funny, Be careful Alison"

"oh you used Alison."

"thats her name Maxime"

"ohhh" Max laughed

"I will" she said I just kepy watching her. as i was talking to max. I looked over at her and she was on the edge of the dock she was looking down at the water. And the next thing i know I saw her fall in.

"Ali!!" I sceamed dropped my drink and took of, down the dock running as fast as i can. I came to the end on the dock and jumped in the water. I couldn't find her.

"Ali!" I looked aroundI didn'see her. I saw bubbles coming up from the water a few feet away from me.I went under and swim as fast as i could. fanili I felt her. I grabbed her. I swam up. and hels her close, and patted her back. she was coughing and crying.

"Daddy" she coughed

"shhh....Baby girl i got you."

I lifted her and put her on the dock with my mom, dad, and max, and a someother people. i got on the dock sat down to her, and grabbed her held her colse. she was still coughing.

"put your hands over your head." I said out of breath, and patting her back.

"Ali, your gonna gave daddy a heartattack, I told you to be careful."

I nodded "Shhh. It's okay, i'm here." I got up

"Is she okay?" mom asked, as I was taking her back to the house.

"yeah. i'm going to get her dried off."

"okay"

I took her in the house dried her off, put dry clothes on her, an di put on some dry clothes on too. My mom came in

"is she alright?"

"yeah, she'll be okay."

"how about you?"

"she going to be the death off me. you know. I was scared out of my mind."

"me too."

"I couldn't find her, mom."

"but you did that all that matters." Ali come out o fthe otehr room.

"Daddy, can you put m y hair up?"

"yeah, turn around."

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