Sunday, September 19, 2010

Chapter 9 part 2

After I got done with that, we went back outside, Ali was glued to my leg.

"Sweetie, it's okay" I said

"is she okay" dad asked

"yeah she'll be fine"

"Do you want to come with me, honey" he said to Ali getting down to her level and holding his hands out. she nodded and he picked her up.

"go have fun" he said to me.

"okay" I said I am I supposed to have fun when my daughter almost drowned.

Pretty Much everybody that was here asked me if Ali was okay, and every second I looked at Ali to make sure she was okay.

I was getting late, and everybody was pretty much gone. Me, my dad, mom, Taylor, and max was sitting outside on the patio. Ali was still with my dad almost asleep.

"her I'll take her" I told him.

"are you sure?"

"yeah" I took her and held her against my chest, and sat back down.

About a house later my mom, dad, and Taylor left. Max was staying with us tonight. I put Ali to bed, And went out in the living room.

"Dude, you okay?" Max asked

"yeah, I'm fine, why?"

"you get seem different"

"well max I'm a single dad, I have more important things to worry about."

"yeah, i know but Kaylee been gone for awhile, it's been almost a year. I just think if you get out a little more you feel a little better."

"Max i feel fine. i got a lot on my mind, Like I don't know what i'm going to go next."

"what do you mean?"

"with Ali, I don't know what I'm going to do when have games and stuff, my mom was there last season when. Kay died the help but she won't be here this time."

"well I will help"

"Dude, we have the same job."

"we we don't have the same interview at the same time, and stuff."

"yeah true, thanks"

"you'll figure something out"

"I hope."

Chapter 9 part 1

sorry it took so long between school,things after school,and Softball on the weekends now, i'm trying, but comment and tellme what you think.





I walked over a sat with my two grandmother.

"Hi, sweetheart" Nanny Crosby said

"Hi, you two having fun?"

"yes" Nanny Fordes said

"yes, watching her have fun." Nanny crosby said as Ali came running to me all wet.

"Daddy,come down on the dock."

"I'll be down"

"okay" she said running back down.

"you love her" Nanny Crosby

"well yeah"

"I mean she really is every thing to you."

"She is. i don't what I do without her. she is everything to me."

"Daddy!" Ali yelled

"wel I better get down there, thanks for coming"

"your welcome sweetie"

I walked down to the water, Ali was on the edge of the water.Max xame up to me.

"Man. she a handful, I don't how yodo it."

"trust me, it not easy, well she should sleep tonight."

"Ali where you going?" I said watching her start walking on the dock.

I rolled my eyes

"yeah, daddy on the dock." Max said

"haha funny, Be careful Alison"

"oh you used Alison."

"thats her name Maxime"

"ohhh" Max laughed

"I will" she said I just kepy watching her. as i was talking to max. I looked over at her and she was on the edge of the dock she was looking down at the water. And the next thing i know I saw her fall in.

"Ali!!" I sceamed dropped my drink and took of, down the dock running as fast as i can. I came to the end on the dock and jumped in the water. I couldn't find her.

"Ali!" I looked aroundI didn'see her. I saw bubbles coming up from the water a few feet away from me.I went under and swim as fast as i could. fanili I felt her. I grabbed her. I swam up. and hels her close, and patted her back. she was coughing and crying.

"Daddy" she coughed

"shhh....Baby girl i got you."

I lifted her and put her on the dock with my mom, dad, and max, and a someother people. i got on the dock sat down to her, and grabbed her held her colse. she was still coughing.

"put your hands over your head." I said out of breath, and patting her back.

"Ali, your gonna gave daddy a heartattack, I told you to be careful."

I nodded "Shhh. It's okay, i'm here." I got up

"Is she okay?" mom asked, as I was taking her back to the house.

"yeah. i'm going to get her dried off."

"okay"

I took her in the house dried her off, put dry clothes on her, an di put on some dry clothes on too. My mom came in

"is she alright?"

"yeah, she'll be okay."

"how about you?"

"she going to be the death off me. you know. I was scared out of my mind."

"me too."

"I couldn't find her, mom."

"but you did that all that matters." Ali come out o fthe otehr room.

"Daddy, can you put m y hair up?"

"yeah, turn around."

Monday, September 6, 2010

Chapter 8

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About three week later. It was my birthday, and I was having friends and family over that night.

I woke up by Ali jumping on me.

"Daddy!"

"oh.......what?"

"Happy Birthday"

"thanks baby girl" I said getting out of bed

"here" She said handing me a piece of paper.

"what is this?"

"looke at it."

I turned it over, and saw a man pretty sure it was me, with a haockey stick, and skakes on with a puck beside it, it is bigger then me. All I could do was smile.

"Do you like it" Alli asked "thats you"

"i love it, sweetie" I said picking her up and gave her a kiss.

"grandma here"

"yeah?"

"yeah, she brought over food, and drinks"

"oh, okay"

We went downstairs

"hi mom"

"happy birthday honey" she said hugging me

"thanks mom"

"okau, I got all this food, drinks, and your dad is getting the beer, and all that stuff."

"ahh, good, thanks for all this mom"

"your welcome"

It was almost 3:00 I finish getting ali dress, and I was talking with my mom and dad. Taylor and Ali are in the living room play. the door bell rang.

"i got it" ALi yealled

"I'm behind you" i yelled running to catch up to her. She opened the door.

"Uncle Max" Ali yelled and Max pcked her up

"hey sugarbaby, how have you been? he has called her that since she was born.

"good"

"have you been keeping you dad in line?"

"yeah" she said looking at me with a smile.

"haha go play" I said and she took off running back in the living room.

"happy birthday man"

"thanks"

"how you doing?"

"good"

"how about you?"

"great"

Everybody was there around 6:00, I was outside talking to marc, And Ali was down at the dock, in the water with max. I looked down at the dock and smiled.

"she looks like her mother" marc said

"huh, oh yeah she does, she act like her."

"what do you mean?"

"she hardheaded just like Kaylee"

"really?"

"yeah, when she wants to be."

Saturday, September 4, 2010

Chapter 7

"Why don't we go get something to eat" my mom said

"yeah" dad said

I nodded and looked at ali, and I layed down in the blanket and started to rub Ali back.

"Ali sweetie, wake up"

"ugh" she said

"sweetie"

"daddy"

"wake up honey, were going to get something to eat."

"okay" she said not moving. I picked he up, and she put her arms around my neck, and fell back alseep, I bent down and picked up her blanket up and carried her to the car. I layed her down in her car seat and cover her up, and got in the driver seat. We just webt ti a fast food place. Als was still sleeping. I justed stay outside with her while they went inside, I told them get to get me a burger and get her chicken nugget. they came out with the food, and we went back to the field. I got Ali out of the car, the second game was just starting, I was holding Ali watching the game, and my mom said.

"Do you want me to take her so you can eat?"

"no, its okay, I got her"

"Okay"

as I said that Ali started move

"hey sweetie"

"Hi daddy"

"do you want something to eat?"

"yeah"

"okay" I said putting her down on a blanket, and giving he, her food. I sat in a chair next to her, and ate my food.

"come on tay" I yelled standing by the fience with my dad, with Ali standing up against my leg, it was almost 9:00, taylor and them were on the last game, in the last innin, tied 5-5 tay was up to bat. she hit it to right field and got on first there is a girl on second.

"come on Aunt tawor" Ali yelled I picked her up. she was getting tired she layed he head on my shoulder, this girl came up and hit the ball to center, the girl on second ran and the game was over. All the girls ran out on the field and jumped on eachother. After that they shooked hands, and get there medals. we went to see tay.

"great job, tay" I said

"yeah" ali said, we all laughed

"thanks" she said

Taylor watch to catch the bus, we went back cleaned up our stuff and got in the car. I took mom, dad, and nanny home, my mom and dad left right away to pick up taylor.

I look in the back, and Ali was trying to stay awake. I was getting tired myself. when I got home. I parked the car got out and open Ali's door, and she was out. I got he out of the car took her in the house, and layed her in the living room. then, I unloaded the car. I was done with that. I locked the front door, turnedout the lights, took ali to her room layed her down cover her up. The went to my room changed, layed down and I was out.